Not my edits, but I saw these when looking through my subscriptions earlier:
https://musicbrainz.org/release-group/d6077af7-4bdd-4bb7-8fa2-4cce538e301f/open_edits
https://musicbrainz.org/release-group/28a13493-0f08-4c9c-88d7-09dc9a5f1d78/open_edits
Looking at this thread and the linked edit, there appears to be a precedent to not make this kind of changes.
Especially considering that the series these are part of also consistently keep the title, including the - from THE FIRST TAKE part, as-is.